For Ryan · Week 2 · posts Fri 13 Nov

Ten mistakes, the animation pack.

Not filmed yet, so every graphic is tied to the words Lloyd says. When the cut is back they get timed to it, and a word, number or colour is a quick re render.

36Files, numbered in the order they first appear
227sOf finished animation in the pack
4K3840 by 2160, 50 fps, ProRes 4444 with alpha

Before you start

How to use the pack.

Drop it on V2 over Lloyd, trim to taste. 50 fps, alpha, 4K. Nothing to key and nothing to build.

Side files

Sit clear of Lloyd. Lay them straight over him.

Full files

Full screen cutaways. Put W2 00 Ground under them, or keep Lloyd under them dimmed to 40%.

Holds

Every file has a hold frame and a PNG still with the same name. Freeze or lay the still to run it longer.

Ends

Each file ends with a 0.34 second exit. Trim it off for a hard cut back to Lloyd.

Motion blur

Already in the file. Don't add more.

Changes

A word, a number, a colour, a timing or a size is a setting and a re render, not a rebuild. Just ask.

At a glance

The pack.

In script order

The storyboard.

Section 01 · 2 files

Hook

On screen10 MISTAKES

  • 01
    W2 01 Ad account.mov7.0s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Most local businesses who tell me Facebook ads don't work are right.

    Stands in for the real blurred account the script asks for, so nothing needs screen recording. Spend climbs, leads sit on zero.

    • 0.1Dark glass table swings in
    • 0.4Four ads appear, names blurred, spend already climbing
    • 1.0Total row lands, leads on 0
    • 2.4Camera drifts towards the leads, the money keeps climbing
    • 4.7Gold box draws around the leads column
    • 5.5Box closes, the rest dims

    The numbers on this one are illustrative. Swap for a real account screen if you have one cleared.

  • 02
    W2 02 Ten mistakes.mov6.7s · Full screen, Ground under it

    It's nearly always one of the same ten mistakes.

    The ten titles fly past and it lands on number nine, ready for: watch out for number nine.

    • 0.110 mistakes
    • 0.8Dives through the list
    • 3.8Lands on 9, Ringing back tomorrow

Section 02 · 1 file

Who it's for

On screenLloyd Hunt, Hunt Visuals

  • 03
    W2 03 Lower third Lloyd.mov5.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    I'm Lloyd, I run Hunt Visuals.

    • 0.3Lloyd Hunt arrives
    • 0.6Hunt Visuals chip follows

Section 03 · 3 files

Mistake 1: A free quote is your offer

On screenPart 1. The ad.

  • 04
    W2 04 Part 1 The ad.mov3.6s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Let's start with the ad.

    • 0.1Part 1 of 3
    • 0.1The flies in along depth
    • 1.2ad lands hard, gold flares
  • M01
    W2 M01 Mistake 1.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake one, your offer is a free quote.

    • 0.3Mistake 1 arrives
    • 0.6Title: A free quote
  • 05
    W2 05 Free quote wall.mov9.0s · Full screen, Ground under it

    It's like wallpaper.

    Can run instead of, or after, the montage of real ads from the Ad Library.

    • 0.1One card, Free quote
    • 0.8A whole wall of them, the first one fades into it
    • 3.5One card lifts forward and its edge goes gold
    • 4.8It lands turned over, Most kitchens £10k to £15k
    • 6.2We never charge more than we quote

    The £10k to £15k is the script's example, not a client's figure. Swap it if Lloyd gets a real one cleared.

Section 04 · 2 files

Mistake 2: Nothing in the first three seconds

On screenMistake 2: The first 3 seconds

  • M02
    W2 M02 Mistake 2.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake two, nothing happens in the first three seconds.

    • 0.3Mistake 2 arrives
    • 0.6Title: The first 3 seconds
  • 06
    W2 06 Hook rate.mov11.0s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Take your three second views and divide them by your impressions.

    Teaches the sum before the Ads Manager screen.

    • 0.13 second views
    • 1.0Divide sign
    • 1.4Impressions
    • 2.1Equals sign
    • 2.5Hook rate, last word in gold
    • 3.7Scale draws on, 0% to 50%
    • 5.2Green band, 20% to 30%: Normal
    • 7.3Gold marker runs up the scale
    • 8.0Lands on 45%: Properly good

Section 05 · 1 file

Mistake 3: The ad is all about you

On screenMistake 3: All about you

  • M03
    W2 M03 Mistake 3.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake three, the ad is all about you.

    • 0.3Mistake 3 arrives
    • 0.6Title: All about you

Section 06 · 1 file

Mistake 4: Every ad looks the same

On screenMistake 4: Every ad looks the same

  • M04
    W2 M04 Mistake 4.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake four, every ad you run looks the same.

    • 0.3Mistake 4 arrives
    • 0.6Title: Every ad looks the same

Section 07 · 1 file

Mistake 5: No proof

On screenMistake 5: No proof

  • M05
    W2 M05 Mistake 5.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake five, asking strangers to trust you with no proof.

    • 0.3Mistake 5 arrives
    • 0.6Title: No proof

Section 08 · 3 files

Mistake 6: Splitting a small budget

On screenPart 2. The setup.

  • 07
    W2 07 Part 2 The setup.mov3.6s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Part two, the setup. Sits just before mistake six.

    • 0.1Part 2 of 3
    • 0.1The flies in along depth
    • 1.2setup lands hard, gold flares
  • M06
    W2 M06 Mistake 6.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake six, splitting a small budget into loads of little pieces.

    • 0.3Mistake 6 arrives
    • 0.6Title: Splitting a small budget
  • 08
    W2 08 Budget split.mov11.0s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Say you've got twenty quid a day.

    Runs under the whole budget explanation, one move per sentence.

    • 0.1£20 a day lands, one solid gold block
    • 2.6It slices into 5
    • 3.0The slabs spread apart and the gold drains out
    • 4.0Each one labelled £4
    • 4.65 ad sets
    • 6.4They slide back together
    • 7.41 ad set, gold again
    • 7.8The ad cards rise out of it
    • 8.7Meta moves the money

Section 09 · 1 file

Mistake 7: Judging it too early, and fiddling with it

On screenMistake 7: Fiddling

  • M07
    W2 M07 Mistake 7.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake seven, judging it after two days and changing everything.

    • 0.3Mistake 7 arrives
    • 0.6Title: Fiddling

Section 10 · 2 files

Mistake 8: The same ad for months

On screenMistake 8: Stale ads

  • M08
    W2 M08 Mistake 8.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake eight, running the same ad for months.

    • 0.3Mistake 8 arrives
    • 0.6Title: Stale ads
  • 09
    W2 09 Cost per lead.mov7.3s · Full screen, Ground under it

    One of our gym ads started at about three quid a lead.

    The real numbers from the gym account: about £3 in June, about £37 in August. The curve between them is a shape, not data, so the middle isn't labelled.

    • 0.3Starts at £3
    • 2.5Creeping up
    • 4.1Lands on £37

Section 11 · 4 files

Mistake 9: Ringing back tomorrow

On screenPart 3. After they enquire.

  • 10
    W2 10 Part 3 After they enquire.mov3.6s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Part three, after they enquire. Sits just before mistake nine.

    • 0.1Part 3 of 3
    • 0.1After they flies in along depth
    • 1.2enquire lands hard, gold flares
  • M09
    W2 M09 Mistake 9.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake nine, the expensive one. Ringing back tomorrow.

    • 0.3Mistake 9 arrives
    • 0.6Title: Ringing back tomorrow
  • 11
    W2 11 Ringing back tomorrow.mov10.5s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Picture it from their side. It's nine at night.

    9:04pm, the form goes in. The clock runs on to 12:30pm the next day and the call is too late.

    • 0.1Phone lands, 9:04pm
    • 1.5Form sent
    • 3.0The clock runs on to the next day
    • 4.712:30pm, missed call
    • 6.3They've already sorted it
  • 12
    W2 12 Text back.mov10.5s · Full screen, Ground under it

    You need a text that goes back the second they enquire.

    Same phone, the other story. The text comes straight back and the phone rings at 9:05.

    • 0.1Phone lands, 9:04pm
    • 1.5Form sent
    • 2.4Text comes straight back
    • 5.09:05pm, the phone rings
    • 6.2Whoever rings first gets the chat

Section 12 · 2 files

Mistake 10: Only counting what Meta counts

On screenMistake 10: Missing the real number

  • M10
    W2 M10 Mistake 10.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    Mistake ten, only counting the leads Meta shows you.

    • 0.3Mistake 10 arrives
    • 0.6Title: Missing the real number
  • 13
    W2 13 Three numbers.mov9.0s · Full screen, Ground under it

    Judge the whole thing on three numbers every week.

    • 0.1Chip: Every week
    • 1.1First slab swings in: Enquiries came in
    • 3.1Second slab lands nearer: Spoke to or went out to see
    • 5.2Camera backs away, third slab swings in
    • 5.8Lands in gold and flares: Turned into paid work

Section 13 · 1 file

Our own mistake

On screenBonus: ours

  • M11
    W2 M11 Bonus.mov5.5s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    And a bonus one, because we've made plenty of these ourselves.

    • 0.3Bonus arrives
    • 0.6Title: ours

Section 14 · 1 file

Recap

On screenThe ten as a checklist

  • 14
    W2 14 The ten checklist.mov21.4s · Full screen, Ground under it

    So, the ten.

    Ticks land one at a time as he reads them. Set the pace to his read once the cut is back.

    • 0.2The ten
    • 1.01. A free quote as your offer
    • 2.62. Nothing in the first three seconds
    • 4.23. An ad that's all about you
    • 5.84. Every ad looking the same
    • 7.45. No proof
    • 9.06. A small budget split into pieces
    • 10.67. Judging it too early and fiddling
    • 12.28. The same ad for months
    • 13.89. Ringing back tomorrow
    • 15.410. Only counting what Meta counts
    • 17.1On three or more? It's the setup around your ads.

Section 15 · 1 file

Close

  • 15
    W2 15 End chip.mov7.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    DM me GROWTH on Instagram, @huntvisualsuk.

    • 0.3DM me
    • 1.1GROWTH lands with the flare
    • 1.8on Instagram
    • 2.1@huntvisualsuk

    The chip has to match the word Lloyd says. The script says GROWTH, but the 4 Nov decision says every video ends on its own word, so this may change before filming. It is one setting.

Section 16 · 10 files

The 1 of 10 counter

On screenSits in the corner the whole way through the long form

  • C01
    W2 C01 Counter 1.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake one until mistake two.

    Each counter file rolls in and holds. Lay its PNG still to run it as long as you need.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.71 pops in
  • C02
    W2 C02 Counter 2.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake two.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 1 to 2
  • C03
    W2 C03 Counter 3.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake three.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 2 to 3
  • C04
    W2 C04 Counter 4.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake four.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 3 to 4
  • C05
    W2 C05 Counter 5.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake five.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 4 to 5
  • C06
    W2 C06 Counter 6.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake six.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 5 to 6
  • C07
    W2 C07 Counter 7.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake seven.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 6 to 7
  • C08
    W2 C08 Counter 8.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake eight.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 7 to 8
  • C09
    W2 C09 Counter 9.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake nine.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 8 to 9
  • C10
    W2 C10 Counter 10.mov4.0s · Side, straight over Lloyd

    From mistake ten to the recap.

    • 0.1Chip arrives
    • 0.7Rolls from 9 to 10